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©2009-2010 =HayleyW
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Taken from Station Pier in Melbourne, Victoria.

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:icongun-man:
well what can i say best to get the negative side out of the way first the excess light wash's out the blacks which is easly fixed with lightroom or photoshop next is a knit picking thing with me the sig in the corner and piece name would look much better on a boarder also you could use some more contrast but thats up to your tastes really ok enough of the negatives on to the positives the shot is well composed the building sillouette works well as does the light reflection off the water also the cloud formation is interesting im hopeing to see more from you hope this helps you out if you have questions feel free to ask

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:icongreenjinjo:
That's a really cool shot
:iconsackrilige:
Ooh lovely ^^ I haven't been to station pier since I last took the Spirit in 1995!
:iconhayleyw:
Woah that was ages ago...we'd have both been what four?
:iconhayleyw:
If you're 20 like your page says 5-6 :b
:iconhayleyw:
aaah you're a year older
:iconsackrilige:
Indeed I am ^^, 21 this year, another number, they sure are passing by quickly:XD:.

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May 20, 2009
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May 18, 2009, 4:58:44 PM

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